Hello,
Looking great! Thank you for sharing, that’s very helpful!
Just one note: the attached image isn’t Scene 10 by itself, but rather all the illustrations with the white accents that I shared so you could compare whether you prefer the white accents or just the line illustrations. Sorry for the confusion!
I haven’t worked on Scene 10 yet, as I wanted to get your approval on Scenes 11–14 first. Since the simplified versions of those illustrations will also appear in Scene 10, I think it makes sense to finalize them first so they’re easier to adjust before moving on to Scene 10.
I like the idea of having the screen as the center of Scene 10.
One thing we should keep in mind is that the illustration in Scene 10 will need to be simplified, since it will later zoom in and reveal more details – similar to what we have with the toddler and whale, or the flying people and their appearance on the screen in the later scenes.
Another thing I was wondering about: if the animation separates the scene by moving elements toward the corners, what would happen to the parts of the illustration that aren’t represented in Scenes 11–14? Would they simply move out of frame? Or could we zoom into the screen and have the rest of the illustration fade away? In that case, the screen should become the first scene after Scene 10.
I’m also still not sure about the positioning of the logos in Scenes 11–14 – it feels a little unbalanced to me. Initially, I imagined them as two separate slides: the first with the logo, followed by the illustrations. But maybe that doesn’t make as much sense.
For Scene 10, I also had an idea to add a few characters who look like MF workers, carrying a box, putting up a ladder, mounting a light, etc. Basically, making things happen “behind the scenes” (not our actual scenes, just in a general sense :D).
Feel free to share your thoughts on any of this – what you think could work and what might not.
To make some sense of all my thoughts and move forward, could you let me know if you’d like to make any changes to Illustrations 11–14?
Once we have those approved, I can move on to Scene 10 based on your instructions.